imote Universal Remote Control pitch (Analog form)
Improvements to the pitch
- Better design of the remote.
- A different name for the remote rather then using i in the name and a better designed logo.
- Giving the remote some more functions.
- Making it different to remotes which are similar but not identical.
- Add some new technology which doesn't yet exist in other remotes.
- Giving the remote customisable cover/case, like mobile phones, so the owner can choose any colour or design they want for the remove itself.
- Giving the remote different interactive interface themes and giving the option for the owner to create their own theme.
- More detail on what the remote can do and functions.
- More illustrations on the old and new.
- Illustrations of the remote.
- Better layout and title on the pitch.
- More catching colours into the pitch.
- Catchy slogans and wording.
- Better pitch wording.
Control group
- Kyle O'Reilly
- Ashleigh Phillips
- Gerard Regan
Improvements to the pitch
Rob,
ReplyDeleteI like your ideas on how to improve your pitch. I think once you redesign your pitch with a big easy to read title, add some high quality graphics and choose key points of text you'll be on the right track.
Permission to progress to the digital medium:
- Approved!
Gerard Regan.